The health benefits of not eating sugar

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Intro Hey you there do you want to be healthy well come on board I am doing the health benefits of not eating sugar if you want to go read  my amazing writing you can. 

Paragraph1 If you eat sugar your teeth will rot away and your gums will be rotten  and your teeth will come out. You will often go to the dentist and it will cost a fortune.

Paragraph2 Added sugars contain a whole bunch of calories with no essential nutrients.For this reason, they are call empty calories.There are no proteins, essential fats, vitamins or minerals in sugar just pure energy.

Conclusion So these are my facts on the health benefits of not eating sugar I hope you like it.