Wednesday, 9 March 2016

Windy night

One night I was fast asleep.Like a sleepy cat. My window was open the wind crawls around me like a blanket. I see the pitch black dust and a shadow of a person.I feel stuff banging in and to me like a big rock fall I get hur. I smell the fresh air hitting on to me it's like a tornado.It sounds like someone's been on my window I quickly get to the window and close it and finally full asleep  on my bed it feels like a soft teddy I do not want to wake up cuz it's so soft.

6 comments:

  1. cool story opal i like it

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  2. thanks tamara me too :)

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  3. Hey Opal I enjoyed the our story it was great to hear how descriptive it was but you need to be more careful when your writing it because you have to check on your spelling. Great job.
    Manaia

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  4. hey,Opal
    i enjoyed your story and the way you used descriptive language xD N.S:check all your spelling

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  5. hey,Opal
    i enjoyed your story and the way you used descriptive language xD N.S:check all your spelling

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