L.G.To describe a character using our five senses.

S.O.S

.”Show not tell” To give the reader a  pitcher in there heads.

. To use adjectives

The Old Man

He lingers to the arms of the tree which stretched out.

His wrinkly arms picked flowers as the fingers of the grass raped over his jandal's.

The wind puffed around in the garden.

He heard cars putting around and birds chirping and his snowy hair waved  in the air.

By Opal Hardy pearce cool